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environment study by SakeKaizen environment study by SakeKaizen
still blow at painting........
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:iconwiddershins-works:
I not too familiar with this critique system personally nor good with words in English so I made a little over-paint on the upper part.
I not touched your proportions nor the shape of the forms but played a bit with the lights and shadows to make it ways more outstanding yet not overdone with effects-colours.
Since I did see you try to make the distant parts go in the distance with make the toning more greyish which helps to give back depth I used this way to make over-paint. You can find it right here (and hope the link works);
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I am better visually then with words, hope this can help you a bit!
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:iconwiddershins-works:
The second one looks very curious with the ankle and composition. You getting pretty good with these speedies! )
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:iconsakekaizen:
thank you; the motive itself is very random, not much thougt went into it... primarily itīs all about technique these times ^^
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:iconwiddershins-works:
I loved a LOT your design concepts of various creatures a lot, you getting into it very nicely! )

And I own you still a respond on your notes, sorry for that just got super busy with exams + driving lessons here (
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:iconsakekaizen:
no problem; good luck with your ongoing work :)
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